You rent an apartment, and you are quite happy with it, but you want to suggest a renovation. Write a letter about your suggestion. In your letter, you should tell:
· Your appreciation of the current condition
· What is the renovation and why?
· What is the benefits of your suggestion?
Dear Mr John,
This is Vikas, one of your tenants, and I have been living in apartment number 501, Hill Road, since 2018. I am writing this letter to put into your kind notice some possible renovations required particularly at my place.
First and foremost, I would like to have this opportunity to express appreciable aspects of my living place. It is really well built and lavished with all sorts of modern amenities. Moreover, 24×7 water supply is at the top. I forgot to mention that rooms are spacious enough and the garden view is appealing.
However, apart from these positive sides, I found some downsides too. At the earliest, there is a need for an air-ventilator in the living area, which could be possible by inserting a window on the back wall. Secondly, walls really need fresh painting work since the previous one is dull and get almost fade. It seems like living in a house belongs from the 90s.
I believe, if you worked on my suggestion, it would not only beautify this place but also add up to the value in the near future.
Hope for an optimistic action from your side.
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